Tuesday, 12 April 2016

My Special Place

My Special Place

Roasting hot pools sizzle me up as I walk in. 
Twirling hydroslide washes me down like a washing machine. 
Delicious ice cream melts down the cone.
Frustrating mini golf tries to dodge the ball. 
My turquoise bike waits for me to ride it.
Long walks drain out energy in my legs.






4 comments:

  1. Cerys - I love how you have described your place without saying where it is. I am thinking Hanmer Springs as many of the things you have chosen to describe remind me of being there with my family. (Kiri)

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  2. Grate common nouns in your writing

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  3. In the whole story I had an image inside my head especially the frustrating mini golf because I connect to that, I know how frustrating that is!

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  4. I absolutely adore this sentence - twirling hydro slide washes me down like a washing machine ❤️

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